Your draft successfully reads in easier blog style. Please do check the attached with my slight edits, and let me know if you feel corrections (which might seem subtle at first glance, Michelle & Rachel), will be OK?
From Charlotte: I have a few more corrections, highlighted in blue. They are mostly just rearrangements of words, but the one around the 92% actually corrects a quantitative statement.
We can print these and look at them together if you like :-)
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Rachel Schmidt
Hi Michelle and Rachel--
The attached blog below for your April posting includes Charlotte's and my corrections on certain statistics, etc.
We're enthused about blog you've drafted for this month's posting since it describes very encouraging data. Plus,emerging from this research there are useful, relevant patient pieces we can write and distribute at our end as follow-ups to provide "how-to" information on specific CBSM strategies.
Michelle (and Charlotte)--
I have a few more corrections, highlighted in blue. They are mostly just rearrangements of words, but the one around the 92% actually corrects a quantitative statement.
Penny B. Block, Ph.D.
Executive Director
Block Center for Integrative Cancer Treatment
Executive Director,
Institute for Integrative Cancer Care Research & Education
Associate Editor
Integrative Cancer Therapies, Sage Science Press
www.BlockMD.com
Tele: 847-492-3040
5230 Old Orchard Road
Skokie, Illinois 60077
Sound good?