Cutting Edge Integrative Pain Centers (Dr. Landrum)

DIGITAL RETAINER: Account person(s): Leslie & Diana

โœ” internal site proofing/review

Assigned to
Greg Ashbaugh, Sr. Copywriter at Healthcare Success Greg A. Michelle Day, ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿผ at Healthcare Success Michelle D.
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Michelle Day, ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿผ at Healthcare Success Michelle

Thanks.

Please keep in mind, Jake Weber, Copywriter at Healthcare Success Jake   still has some minor edits to make to each page's H1 copy. You can look everything else. 

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Greg Ashbaugh, Sr. Copywriter at Healthcare Success
Katherine Dumalski (Kat), ๐Ÿ˜ผ RAR! at Healthcare Success Katherine :

Are you okay with me making the changes that I find while proofing this? There will be some things that are judgment calls, in which case I will present those as findings to consider. But the rest, like mispelled or missing words, etc., I can fix in a fraction of the time it takes to narrate where and what the change are. 

Can you dig it?

-- G
Katherine Dumalski (Kat), ๐Ÿ˜ผ RAR! at Healthcare Success
Yes please, thanks, K

Michelle Day, ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿผ at Healthcare Success Michelle  
Greg Ashbaugh, Sr. Copywriter at Healthcare Success
Katherine Dumalski (Kat), ๐Ÿ˜ผ RAR! at Healthcare Success Katherine :

Proofing done. Made several minor changes to the Dev site.

Here are the only two things I was unable to address, both on the home page:

http://landrum.healthcaresuccess.net/
  • Hero-shot copy section; body copy โ€“ Erroneous use of capital letters. Lowercase ALL except for โ€œBoardโ€ and โ€œMichiana.โ€ There is only one proper noun in this sentence (Michiana), and one sentence opener (Board). All other caps are in error.
  • Footer section, Navigation at right โ€“ Fix extra line space between โ€œDoctorsโ€ and โ€œServices.โ€ Looks like a nav option is missing, but it isnโ€™t. 
โ€” G
Michelle Day, ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿผ at Healthcare Success ๐Ÿ‘
Greg Ashbaugh, Sr. Copywriter at Healthcare Success
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Shellyn Wong
Hi Greg Ashbaugh, Sr. Copywriter at Healthcare Success Greg , I'm out of the house without my laptop right now, but I can help with the spacing of the footer navigation when I get back. There used to be two columns for that footer nav, but I had to stack them when we added more office locations so that messed with the spacing.

The hero image copy is controlled in the "Slider Revolution" menu in WordPress. Let me know if you need help with this.
Greg Ashbaugh, Sr. Copywriter at Healthcare Success
HI, Shellyn... 

Thanks for reaching out on this. I was unable to find the copy anywhere, including in Slider Revolution. I'll try it again now and let you know how it goes. 

-- G
Shellyn Wong
Ah ok. You'd need to click on the icon of the backpack guy, then from what I remember you should see the big layout of the banner and I might have hit another button to edit... Hm, can't remember all my clicking now
Greg Ashbaugh, Sr. Copywriter at Healthcare Success
Shellyn Wong Shellyn :

That's helpful, for sure. Thanks. I'll be in a meeting that may run to 2:30. So, if you go in there to fix the nav at bottom, perhaps you could fix those caps in the slider? If not, just let me know. 

-- G
Shellyn Wong
Hi Greg Ashbaugh, Sr. Copywriter at Healthcare Success Greg  , I had some issues with my updates to the files and couldn't see my changes, but I got it figured out. The footer spacing has been removed and the hero image text has been updated now.
Greg Ashbaugh, Sr. Copywriter at Healthcare Success
Thanks so much, Shellyn! I appreciate it!

-- G