✔ Make Round 2 Changes:
Completed by Katherine D.
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Shellyn
ART CHANGES:- Can we add maps to the locations page?
- Add more AGE diversity to the home page.
- Option A: Replace the "relaxed woman" with a relaxed senior/seniors (need more age diversity, since we lost our old black couple)
- Option B: Replace the "in pain ethnic man" to an "in pain ethnic senior"
The following are all approved copy changes per
Jake
COPY CHANGES:
Across Site:- Change promo number from 866 725 9607 to 574-821-4363
- Change "Pain Specialists/Centers in Elkhart, IN" to "Pain Specialists/Centers in Michiana , IN"
- Change: Primary location is 244 Waterfall drive Elkhart, IN 46516,
- Add: fax 574 855 5288
- Michiana Surgery Center 3212 Hickory Road Mishawaka, In 46545
- Community Hospital of Bremen 1020 High road Bremen, In 46506
Home Page/Services Page:- Correct: Lumbar reticulopathy to Lumbar radiculopathy and (sciatica)
- Change order of conditions to:
- Upper & lower back pain
- Complex regional pain syndrome
- Peripheral neuropathy
- Migraines
- Cervical spinal stenosis
- Occipital neuralgia
- Sciatica pain
- Cluster headaches
- Piriformis syndrome
About Page:- Revised 3rd paragraph:
- As an interventional pain care group, we’re highly trained at fixing the source of your pain with minimally invasive procedures. And as an integrative practice, we also prescribe the full range of pain treatments, including:
- Change "retentive medicine to "regenerative medicine"
- Change the order of services to:
- Endoscopic surgery
- Advanced Regenerative medicine techniques
- Traditional Pain relieving Injections
- Combined electrochemical therapy
- Physical therapy
- Neurofeedback
- Medications
Services Page:- Change order of procedures to:
- Endoscopic spine surgery (including SI joint fusion)
- Spinal cord stimulation (traditional, high frequency and dorsal root ganglion)
- Advanced Regenerative medicine techniques
- Facet rhizotomy (cervical, thoracic and lumbar)
- Neurofeedback and Transcranial stimulation
- Transforaminal epidural steroid injection
- Ultrasound-guided joint injections
- Combined electrocehmical therapy
- Coolief® cooled radiofrequency ablation
- Kyphoplasty
A few changes to the posted list.
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Home Page/Services Page:
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Change the order of services to:
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Services Page:
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Let me know if you have questions!
I'm fairly sure
So the headlines, instead of saying "...in Elkhart, IN" should say something to the effect of "in the Michiana area, with offices in Elkhart, Mishawaka and Bremen"
Thoughts?
So the bulleted lists on the home, about and services pages have been updated. Phone numbers and primary address (and map on contact page) have been updated. Fax number has been updated on the contact page and in the footer. We didn't need to add the fax anywhere did we?
As for the two additional locations, how did we want to address this? Do we add all three locations in the footer and on the contact page, each location with a map as well?
I didn't change the "... in Elkart, IN" wording yet until it has been finalized. Will we be going with Kat's suggestion of "in the Michiana area, with offices in Elkhart, Mishawaka and Bremen" or something else?
but you can plot all the points on the single map on the contact us page
(first one can't exactly tell what race he is?)
So for the map with multiple points, I can create that with Google maps, but I have to log into my Google account to create it and control the privacy of it. Is there any way this is traced back to me and if so do we have a company Google account for this kind of thing?
oh that's a good point, I don't know. you can login as him actually:
login
Alright
Also, the new addresses have been added to the Contact page as well as the new map with the three pinpoints. I'll re-make the map under Dr. Landrum's account. I am also working on how the layout of the footer will look with the new addresses.
Also a couple questions for Jake or anyone else this might apply to...
#1: Please also check the "Thank you" page for wording to make sure it is good to go:
http://landrum.healthcaresuccess.net/contact-us/thank-you/
(Also, I need a photo for this page! I will hunt and get back to you guys.)
#2: Do you have meta title and meta description and keywords for the home page?
#3: There is a blog page that is currently empty. Shall I hide this page for now?
http://landrum.healthcaresuccess.net/blog/
These should be the last tasks on this list, but let me know if you have more revisions or if I'm missing anything. Thanks!
Can I get the following copy changes on the About Page:
In this first paragraph change "Dr. Orlando Landrum" to "our pain specialists"
Then, in the second paragraph change "If Dr. Landrum believes yoga and stretching is the answer to your discomfort, that’s what he’ll prescribe. to "If our physicians believe yoga and stretching is the answer to your discomfort, that’s what they’ll prescribe."
Also left align the copy and form on the "Contact Us" page
I also added the extra addresses and map links to the footer and slightly changed the layout to accommodate to the extra wording.
I also just added the same photo for the contact us page in the thank you page. Did we want a different photo for that?
Home page, period after "region" please. Also make lower case, everything except for theB in Board and the M for Michiana. Also make font larger, on mobile its too small to read.
Home page, comma after "want".
Also, either Kat or
If you have any other changes, just send them by. Thanks!