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Jake
Orlando had the following feedback:
Please review these two web pages for the content that meshes best with the technical details of what Orlando is trying to offer:
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http://www.jaspermd.com/endoscopic-surgery/
Halfway down the page it mention the differences between this procedure and traditional surgery (ie 1/4 inch incision, as opposed to 1 inch in incision in the copy) . I'd request that in the copy (removal of: pain in the arms and spinal fusion)
2. http://ainsworthinstitute.com/treatments/
Instead of si joint fusion, one of the following treatments:
drg stimulation
hf10 therapy
superion interspinous spacer
Let me know if you have any questions, KMichelle
I don't really understand what this means:
But I changed one-inch to 1/4-inch and replaced the SI joint fusion procedure with copy about the HF10.