Cutting Edge Integrative Pain Centers (Dr. Landrum)

DIGITAL RETAINER: Account person(s): Leslie & Diana

revise services copy

Assigned to
Jake Weber, Copywriter at Healthcare Success Jake W.
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Jake Weber, Copywriter at Healthcare Success Jake

Orlando had the following feedback:

Please review these two web pages for the content that meshes best with the technical details  of what Orlando is trying to offer:

1.
http://www.jaspermd.com/endoscopic-surgery/

Halfway down the page it mention the differences between this procedure and traditional surgery (ie 1/4 inch incision, as opposed to 1 inch in incision in the copy) . I'd request that in the copy (removal of: pain in the arms and spinal fusion)

2. http://ainsworthinstitute.com/treatments/
Instead of si joint fusion, one of the following treatments:
drg stimulation
hf10 therapy
superion interspinous spacer

Let me know if you have any questions, K

Michelle Day, 💁🏼 at Healthcare Success Michelle  

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Jake Weber, Copywriter at Healthcare Success
I'm going to work on this tomorrow afternoon after completing NSC's web copy.

Katherine Dumalski (Kat), 😼 RAR! at Healthcare Success Katherine Michelle Day, 💁🏼 at Healthcare Success Michelle  
Jake Weber, Copywriter at Healthcare Success
Katherine Dumalski (Kat), 😼 RAR! at Healthcare Success Katherine ,

I don't really understand what this means: 

Please review these two web pages for the content that meshes best with the technical details  of what Orlando is trying to offer:

But I changed one-inch to 1/4-inch and replaced the SI joint fusion procedure with copy about the HF10.
Jake Weber, Copywriter at Healthcare Success
Jake Weber completed this to-do.