✔ Revisions Round 1
Completed by Katherine D.
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Jake W.
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- Notes
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Jake
I am assigning this now, but you don't have to start on it until next week. I am still expecting some materials form the client, but I wanted to give you an early heads up. The following is feedback from the client on our copy (note that the bold copy was actually an action item for the client):- Keep in mind the diverse group of “weekend warriors,” the “mature population” which includes those “get up and goers” and also just the “setters”, plus the “early adopters” - people who are captains of industry in the RV and manufacturing businesses local to the Elkhart area (your 1%ers)
- Need to add the other doctor (to home page and to doctors page)
- Orlando to send dr.’s CV
- Copy notes include:
- HOME
- Add to H3: Providing interventional and nonsurgical solutions for chronic and sudden pain, including:
- Neurofeedback therapy (this is a cash pay procedure, appeals to early adopters)
- Combined electro therapy (this is a cash pay procedure, appeals to early adopters)
- Add to H3: Providing interventional and nonsurgical solutions for chronic and sudden pain, including:
- SERVICES
- Add to H2: Relieving pain caused by many different conditions throughout the body. - peripheral neuropathy
- ABOUT
- Add to H2: Providing you with the full spectrum of pain care capabilities to restore your way of life. - retentive medicine, endoscopic surgery
- Should we also add here:
- Neurofeedback therapy
- Combined electro therapy
- Should we also add here:
- Add to H2: Providing you with the full spectrum of pain care capabilities to restore your way of life. - retentive medicine, endoscopic surgery
- We should note somewhere on the site the following points of distinction:
- The ONLY affiliate of Regenics (Regenix?) in all of Indiana
- Please clarify the accolade and associations (provide web link if you have one)
- Please forward us the badge so we can put it on the website
- Unique practice featuring two Ivy-league doctors of pain treatment in Indiana (Yale and Harvard graduates; this is highly unusual for the area)
- The ONLY affiliate of Regenics (Regenix?) in all of Indiana
Thanks!, Kat
Michelle
The client provided these documents and a bio for his partner. Please add a bio for this guy to the "doctors page"/section and adjust any other language as necessary to the home page.
Also, in the future, please leave unnecessary information (i.e. client to-dos) out of your instructions to me.
I'll close this out and start a new to-do for you.