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From the list: Batch 3

✔ Update copy for Batch 3: Silvercrest #6

Michelle D. added this on May 06, 2019
Completed May 08, 2019 by Betsy S.

Assigned to: Betsy S.
Due on: May 09, 2019
Notes: https://gchcshr.wpengine.com

-Okaloosa is misspelled throughout the site
-“Have a look around, won’t you!” Sounds a little too country for my liking. Can we reword?
-Opening sentence of Amenities/Life Enrichment is missing a word or needs rewording.
-Change resident to patient, facility to center

Roya Michelle Chloe

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Betsy Stevenson

The opening sentence to Amenities was always this:
Healing is a journey. Some days are full of progress and rewards, while others are just plain hard work. [but i edited this part a bit] To encourage a positive state of mind (an important part of getting better!) while you or your family member is on the road to recovery, we provide an array of features, amenities and activities to keep you motivated to heal.

May 06, 2019 at 10:56 PM Notified 3 people

Betsy Stevenson

I also only saw one misspelled Okaloosa - can ya'll give it another look?

only found 1

May 06, 2019 at 10:57 PM Notified 3 people

Celeste Ethington