✔ Updates for Batch 3: Heritage #9
Completed by Celeste E.
- Assigned to
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Celeste E.
Chloe R.
Eddie O.
Simona R.
- Due on
- Notes
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Hi Betsy,
https://gchchphr.wpengine.com
Eddie
Simona
Regarding the Amenities picture on the HP (& on amenities page):
The client asked if we had any photos with people on the patio. Do you think any of these could work? If not, then we can just advise against switching out the photo.
Betsy
Don’t love word “Rehabbing” (betsy can you come up with something else?)
- Reword opening paragraph. Currenlty has “team of team of”
- Should Clinical be capitalized in the wording by the picture of patient holding balloons?
- Change “Take a peek at the Park” to “Take a peek (or stroll) of Heritage Park." Betsy you choose between peek or stroll.
- Change "resident" to "patient"
About Us page:- The header wording “How can we help you? Surrounding you with total support.” I am not liking how that reads. Can we use one or the other?
CC:
Diana
Chloe
Celeste
Michelle
Roya
I updated this on the SERVICES page as a bullet:
Pet therapy featuring PAWZ therapy dogs
Yes, thanks for checking up.
Can you please use this photo for Amenities on the HP, and on the Amenities page?
Thank you!