Huron Regional Medical Center (HRMC)

- Digital - AM: Aurora

Design Women's Wellness FB ad [AD] #client approved

Assigned to
Bryce Arroyo, Healthcare Success Bryce A. Melissa Martinez, Client Services Director at Healthcare Success Melissa M.
Due on
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Timeline:
  • w/o 7/20: Dana work on ad creation
  • 7/24: Provide ad for internal review

Hi Dana,

Please design the FB ad for Women's Wellness center.

Copy:
  • Approved ad copy is AD 1B

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Bryce Arroyo, Healthcare Success Bryce Melissa Martinez, Client Services Director at Healthcare Success Melissa  

Couple of things here: 

The copy doc above indicates only 1 approved execution, please confirm. I thought we were going to do one for expectant mom's and another for conditions like endometriosis? Just making sure.

The pdf from the previous creative presentation is all telemedicine, so I don't believe any of it is relevant to this execution. 
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Dana Callow, Healthcare Success Dana

The client decided to only do the copy reflecting issues like endometriosis. They felt like that would bring more patients to the WWC.

The previous creative was telemedicine focused but they liked the style of the creative.

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Bryce Arroyo, Healthcare Success Bryce Melissa Martinez, Client Services Director at Healthcare Success Melissa  

I will see what I can do there. Those were found sets of illustration relative to a hot topic. Stay tuned. 
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That’s right Dana Callow, Healthcare Success Dana  
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Sent to client 7.30.20
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Client did not approve of the ad. They did not like the cartoonish images of women's body parts rolling through the video. They just felt like that would not resonate. I am having a call to further go over the feedback and will post on here once I get all of their feedback. 
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Dana Callow, Healthcare Success Dana Tamila Kahng, Project Manager at Healthcare Success Tamila Celeste Ethington, Healthcare Success Celeste Melissa Martinez, Client Services Director at Healthcare Success Melissa  

Argh. This is definitely why, if we are only budgeted for one direction, we need to make sure direction, likes/dislikes, etc are established up from. Next time, we'll definitely want to show "styles" via key frames first. Illustration is all the rage, and it's scroll-stopping. BUT, I'm totes not a mind reader for client's personal preferences. 

Please also verify copy is still ok. 
Melissa Martinez, Client Services Director at Healthcare Success
Dana Callow, Healthcare Success Dana   Confirming that they did like the copy, it's just the women's reproductive system in an animated form they are not a fan of. ;) Bryce Arroyo, Healthcare Success Bryce , per a discussion I just had with Dana, please confirm with the client if they would be OK with simply having us remove that part of the video keeping the rest of the design treatment as-is, or going in a different direction of b&w imagery of females and doctors.

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Dana Callow, Healthcare Success Dana Melissa Martinez, Client Services Director at Healthcare Success Melissa  

I just spoke with the client. They love the style just would like to remove the women's reproductive system images. Approve of the copy. 

So yes, go ahead and remove that part and keep the rest. 
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Hi Dana Callow, Healthcare Success Dana ,
When should we expect to see something? Then we can update the due date.
Thank you! 
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Celeste Ethington, Healthcare Success Celeste  

I added this two days ago??? And now it just asked me to upload again. 
Bryce Arroyo, Healthcare Success
Dana Callow, Healthcare Success Dana  

Thanks for this, weird that it didn't save the upload. We have a meeting with the client tomorrow and will show them this. 
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Client liked this direction much better, but would like to change the testimonial we use... 

Here is the quote they would like to use, they understand it is long and we can break it up however we want.. 

"I feel so much better ... I can’t believe I lived with the pain, discomfort and inconvenience of heavy periods for so long! I just thought it was part of being a woman. Most days of every month I dealt with bleeding so heavy I needed to change clothes or bedding, burning in my hips, and just a lack of energy. It was impacting my ability to be a good mom and wife ... and, I missed out on activities I really wanted to be part of. Dr. Castellanos took the time to explain my options, how the ablation procedure would work and truly listened to my concerns and questions. I highly recommend seeing a specialist if you’re suffering ... I can’t believe how good I feel!
- 41-year old mom, Huron"

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Hey there - we can't possibly use this quote! Can someone schedule 10 minutes to discuss on the phone. Thanks - Dana
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Dana Callow, Healthcare Success Dana  

These are awesome! My personal favorite is the first or second video... I will send these to the client today. 
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Dana Callow, Healthcare Success Dana Celeste Ethington, Healthcare Success Celeste  

Client has approved of Option 3!
Celeste Ethington, Healthcare Success thanks Bryce!
Dana Callow, Healthcare Success
Tina should be able to take if from here!
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