Huron Regional Medical Center (HRMC)

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Dr. Brock quote - any changes?

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Greg Ashbaugh, Sr. Copywriter at Healthcare Success Greg A.
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Hi Greg,

Here's the new quote Dr. Brock provided:

"For me, OB/GYN has always been more of a calling than a career. What started out at a young age as a fascination with pregnancy and a respect for the amazing capabilities of the female body, turned into a passion for all aspects of women's healthcare. It is a privilege to partner with women throughout the many stages of their lives, building relationships and developing continuity of care to achieve their goals."

Do you have any revisions? Grammatical or otherwise?

Niki Kaylor, Director of Client Services at Healthcare Success Niki  

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Greg Ashbaugh, Sr. Copywriter at Healthcare Success
Good with one change: Delete comma between “female body” and “turned.” That’s it.

Thanks, Michelle Day, 💁🏼 at Healthcare Success Michelle !

Niki Kaylor, Director of Client Services at Healthcare Success Niki  
Michelle Day, 💁🏼 at Healthcare Success
Cool, thanks!
Greg Ashbaugh, Sr. Copywriter at Healthcare Success
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Greg Ashbaugh, Sr. Copywriter at Healthcare Success
Michelle Day, 💁🏼 at Healthcare Success Michelle :

As I was marking changes to the Landing Page last night, I noticed another change to this quote for Dr. Brock. 

"Throughout the many stages" should be "THROUGH the many stages".

That's it. Sorry for the late addition, here. 

-- G
Michelle Day, 💁🏼 at Healthcare Success 👏