✔ Review Flyer #5 copy changes [CW]#AM Review
Completed by Leslie H.
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Hi
Greg
We have another flyer for your review! Similarly to the last flyer, we some minor changes (date & time & switched out "colon" for "blood disorders", and changed out the bullet points for the description of the next Lunch 'N Learn.)
Could you take a look at the revised flyer before I send to Simona to update?
Thanks!
Roya
Tamila
Megan
Revisions attached. But first...
Your narrative in the instructions above says you used the phrase "blood disorders," but the title and the body copy in the Word .doc both say "blood cancers." I'm leaving it as "cancers," but I am pointing out the discrepancy just in case it should be "disorders." The bullet list in this copy does in fact mention noncancerous blood disorders (fourth bullet).
Let me know if you need anything else!
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Thanks!