FYI, I'm going to be reviewing Rob's Batch 2 and 3 pages, then sending them to him. He will then make all d1 feedback changes to Batches 1, 2 and 3 and submit them together. So, they won't likely be copy-done today.
-- G
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Greg Ashbaugh,Sr. Copywriter
Rob's Batch 3 copy d1 has been reviewed and sent back to Rob for revisions. Batch 2 copy d1 being reviewed now.
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Greg Ashbaugh,Sr. Copywriter
Michelle
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Okay, here is the copy for Women's Wellness Center's website. All pages are here EXCEPT the Home Page, which is no longer in Word and for which the client's changes were marked to the Comp's .pdf.
I reviewed all of Rob's revised copy and made changes as needed. Also wrote page 3 Patient Testimonials, revised 7 Obstetrics, and revised 8 Prenatal Care. Also, as discussed, I removed my concerns about 12 Min Inv Treatment, as I think it may work and, importantly, we need client direction.
Onward! —G
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Greg Ashbaugh completed this to-do.
Niki Kaylor,Director of Client Services
Great!
Michelle
can you please send this to Mike Reynolds for proofreading? Do you have his contact info?
Send proofing to Mike at proof@txcitizen.com. Mike set this account up so that proofing won't get shuffled in with his non-HS emails to mike@txcitizen.
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FYI, I'm going to be reviewing Rob's Batch 2 and 3 pages, then sending them to him. He will then make all d1 feedback changes to Batches 1, 2 and 3 and submit them together. So, they won't likely be copy-done today.
-- G
Okay, here is the copy for Women's Wellness Center's website. All pages are here EXCEPT the Home Page, which is no longer in Word and for which the client's changes were marked to the Comp's .pdf.
This is ready for proofing.
I reviewed all of Rob's revised copy and made changes as needed. Also wrote page 3 Patient Testimonials, revised 7 Obstetrics, and revised 8 Prenatal Care. Also, as discussed, I removed my concerns about 12 Min Inv Treatment, as I think it may work and, importantly, we need client direction.
Onward! —G
Send proofing to Mike at proof@txcitizen.com. Mike set this account up so that proofing won't get shuffled in with his non-HS emails to mike@txcitizen.