RR: 3/1/19
moderate

Betsy

Can you please re-write based on the client's feedback?

Thank you!

1. In header, Rodia and Alicia are missing.
2. Photo is of 3 NPs, but all names are in the header - seems confusing - maybe identify the 3 NPs in the photo.
3. statement "progress" your care - I find that very awkward.
4. Refers to oncology nursing - I don't think referring to this as nursing is appropriate, as they are more advanced.
5. Vida Kaplan's name is listed at the bottom.
6. Rodia & Alicia are missing from bottom.
7. It seems to group all NPs; and separate out PA Rodia - I think either we list all names there or just NP and PAs.

As far as the banner - it says Nurse Practitioners - should also say Physician Assistants; also notes Amita is "sole US nurse" and should say NP. 

Instead of Providers - the term should be either Advanced Practice Provider or Advanced Practitioner (you had requested we clarify this).

I looked into this and it seems the more current term used is Advanced Practitioner - I'll let you which, once we confirm here.



Please let us know if you have any questions.


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