✔ Write Copy for Chabad Ad [CW]#AM Review
Completed by Chloe R.
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Leslie H.
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Hi
Greg
Drs. Goldfarb and Soffen from PRO are being honored by Chabad in the virtual dinner Tribute Journal.
Can you please write copy for a generic PRO/RCCA full page ad?- Something along the lines of: PRO honors/recognizes the outstanding contributions of our distinguished doctors
- The client specified that Dr. Goldfarb should be mentioned first
Roya
Tamila
Chloe
It looks like Dr. Goldfarb is not on the PRO website and is a solo-practitioner urologist, not a radiation oncologist. (http://sjgoldfarburology.com/)
Please advise.
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This is "done," except for the above-mentioned concern that Dr. Goldfarb is neither a radiation oncologist nor a PRO doctor. It may, however, remain true that he is a close colleague. (As a urologist, he sees plenty of cancer and likely works hand-in-hand with PRO, particularly for prostate cancer.) I just need to know the what-for.
Here's the d1 Copy:
Reassigning for your review.
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Looking at it now.
Sorry for the confusion. Chloe and I completely misunderstood the client. Here are our suggested revisions.
Thanks!
These are "done," except that I had to make some judgment calls I think it's imperative for you to review. I listed all of the honorees, including the spouses/partners and the in-memory and Torah-Talk people. I did not list them in the order they appeared in the Invite. And I listed Goldfarb first, since that was a prime directive earlier. Lastly, Shiff and Baum have extra words; not sure how to best present those. Oops; one more thing: I removed
"PRO doctor" from the box header. It's redundant to the copy and a little diminishing to the non-PRO doctors. It's double-highlighting Soffen, which dilutes the honor to the others.
Reassigning for your review.
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